When families have a meal together it is considered social activity. Do you think eating together is important to people in your country?

When a group of people gather together it is already a social activity.

Therefore

, a

home

that eats at the same

time

in

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the table is essential in my country.

Firstly

, a house without a family is not a

home

, and each household should have a meal together, not a single person would eat if not all of them

are

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at

home

,

everyone

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must wait before eating.

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, in my country, we eat three times a day, and every meal we

will

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eat our food together as a family because we value the essence of unity and it's our culture to leave no one behind.

Secondly

, it is important to build a relationship, especially among siblings and parents.

For example

, statistics say that nowadays, most

of

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the

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parents

didn't

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don't

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have

the

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intimate relationship with their children but they can change that by doing things, like during dinner, they could ask how's there day

, like

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work or school, through that, they could know what is happening inside and outside of their

home

. They could spend a lot of

time

on

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their friends but they could make

time

for their family.

However

, in

this

world today, generations change.

Time

runs so fast and everyone

work

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too much and

neglect

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the opportunity to make

time

for their kids, husband and wife. People kept themselves busy just to earn money and forget their

home

. In conclusion, what matters most in

this

world are those people who

would

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stick with you,

either

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whether

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you are in your ups and downs in life and that's your family, so make

time

for them by spending your

meal

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meals

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with your

love

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ones.