The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centers. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?

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In today's globalised world ,we are buying lots of unwanted things,which are actually not needed.Nowadays youngsters mostly go for shopping in there
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ree moment . they spent lots of salary on the unnecessary items ,which influences every age group , but to be precise it mostly affects the young generation.Many people believe that the younger population should spend their free hour developing their skills and hobby, rather than spending their day in shopping and waste fund.I completely agree with the above statement. I have given two reasons to justify the statement. The
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reason how the teenagers are affected by the shopping ,they usually go for shopping in their free
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and they buy costly clothes or pricy thing
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not actually in need for them.
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,teenager girls went for lunch in the mall but she ends up buying Zara's 1000$ jacket ,she spent lot more check ,which she don't need it .so its waste of cash.people usually but unnecessary things.mostly its school going teenager or collegian.
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negatively impacts on person lifestyle too,
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,student believe that wearing expensive clothes and shoes make them look good and more approachable,but actually,that's,not the case. for an example my friend goes for shopping every now and
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her happy.but it's not the shopping ,which makes her happy its those clothes. To conclude ,most youngsters spending their precious moment and wealth on shopping rather than spending it on worthful skill and hobby.
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