You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter . describe what you enjoyed about the course. . say how much cooking you've done since the course . suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to provide feedback on the
cookery
course
, which I have taken recently from your renowned institute The Kitchen Wonder. As I was quite weak in cutting skills and cooking food items, so I joined your
cookery
course
which was very beneficial for me after finishing the
course
. I enrolled in
this
course
on 15th June 2019 and the
course
was ended after 4 weeks. The
course
was very fascinating as I was able to learn the chopping techniques by using the knife tool. I really enjoyed cutting different food items,
such
as vegetables, fish, chicken, fruits. Every time I had to use variant methods while slicing the
cookery
items. Apart from
this
, I
also
enjoyed making the fried rice along with chicken curry and salad. I learned both skills while making the cuisine. I have been using these lessons on weekends when I normally cook for my family, and they give me excellent remarks. The effect of the
course
had on my chopping techniques and dishes . On certain occasions
such
as birthday parties, family
gathering
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, festivals, I prepare food for the guests , kins and sometimes for my friends and receive
many appreciations
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by
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them. I would like to recommend a baking
course
in your
cookery
institute. Most people are not good at baking because they did not know how to use
electric
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an electric
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or gas oven in a proper way. Introducing
this
course
is really worthwhile for them. I would be
delightful
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to enrol in
this
course
and take spectacular remarks from my relative and family members. I look forward to hearing your optimistic response soon. Yours Faithfully, Surekha Kamble
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