You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter . describe what you enjoyed about the course. . say how much cooking you've done since the course . suggest another cookery course you'd like school to offer.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to provide feedback on the cookery
course
, which I have taken recently from your renowned institute The Kitchen Wonder. As I was quite weak in cutting skills and cooking food items, so I joined your cookery
course
which was very beneficial for me after finishing the course
.
I enrolled in this
course
on 15th June 2019 and the course
was ended after 4 weeks. The course
was very fascinating as I was able to learn the chopping techniques by using the knife tool. I really enjoyed cutting different food items, such
as vegetables, fish, chicken, fruits. Every time I had to use variant methods while slicing the cookery
items. Apart from this
, I also
enjoyed making the fried rice along with chicken curry and salad. I learned both skills while making the cuisine.
I have been using these lessons on weekends when I normally cook for my family, and they give me excellent remarks. The effect of the course
had on my chopping techniques and dishes . On certain occasions such
as birthday parties, family gathering
, festivals, I prepare food for the guests , kins and sometimes for my friends and receive Fix the agreement mistake
gatherings
many appreciations
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much appreciation
by
them.
I would like to recommend a baking Change preposition
from
course
in your cookery
institute. Most people are not good at baking because they did not know how to use electric
or gas oven in a proper way. Introducing Correct article usage
an electric
this
course
is really worthwhile for them. I would be delightful
to enrol in Replace the word
delighted
this
course
and take spectacular remarks from my relative and family members.
I look forward to hearing your optimistic response soon.
Yours Faithfully,
Surekha KambleSubmitted by hKc47$p# on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite