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Many countries plan to ban the sale of petrol and diesel cars in the future, with governments planning to support the use of electric vehicles. Do the advantages of electric vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

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Lots of nations aim to prohibit the sale of petrol and diesel auto later on, with people in power planning to fund the use of electric transport. In my opinion, there are some exceptions, but in most cases, it will be better to have electric vehicles which do not poison the environment. In the essay
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I will discuss advantages as well as disadvantages of electric vehicles. To start with, one benefit could be mentioned as following remarkable differences in environmental tendencies, the situation where almost everyone uses transport vehicles which emit a lot of carbon dioxide and of course
such
 gases pollute nature and bring bad impact on everything seems to have become more widespread. Some findings show that
this
 new innovation will be ecologically cleaner and
also
such
 cars will be more functional in comparison with traditional diesel cars.
Thus
, nobody can disagree that it is extremely challenging to underestimate these. In either case, some researchers who believe that
such
 new technologies' will cost expensive and some members of society can deny
this
 idea, because it will be new for them and people need some time to get used to it may deem the situation worrisome. Highlighting the argument, it can be said that new cars without diesel will need a charger which means that petrol stations will have to have specific equipment which will
also
 cost a lot.
Nevertheless
, it is important to take into accountant every aspect of each specific situation. From my point of view, the advantages mentioned above outweigh the weaknesses because
this
 follows from my own experience since I am an ecologist, who knows how the exhaust gases can affect the world
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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