Some people think that children should be taught to be competitive in school. Others however say that corporation and teamwork in schools are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

A few individuals believe that schools should focus on making

students

more competitive, whereas others assert that

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cooperation

and teamwork are vital for

students

and must be given priority. I intend to mention both the views along with my opinion in the following paragraphs. On the one hand, those who

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former notion opine that

students

need to have

compititive

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competitive

thinking owing to the extensive competition in

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ducation sector and professional life. To explain, in order to take admission in

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institute for tertiary education,

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tudent must be trained enough to compete in its entrance examination. Apart from

this

, while taking

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ob in any prestigious organisation, one has to be in the top positions in the merit list.

For example

, in 2018, according to data given by staff selection board of India, the ratio of government posts to the number of applicants was 1 ratio 500, which indicated huge competition for a single post.

Thus

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of requirements often

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guardians to give priority to the teaching of being competitive in schools.

On the other hand

, proponents of the latter idea assert that other aspects of education

such

as

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work

and

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cooperation

are vital for the torch bearers in future. To elaborate, most of the

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organisation

prefer candidates who can perform well in

team

and

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coordinate

among colleagues efficiently. It is primarily due to the fact that most of the task in the company

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joint efforts of the

team

to complete it successfully. Owing to the above said reason, these

skills

are a primary requirement of the organisations.

For example

, Multinational

comapanies

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companies

, while hiring

students

from universities, often include group discussions and group task so that they can judge the ability of the candidates to

work

in a

team

.

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Therefore

, it can be envisioned that it is imperative to teach

such

skills

in school. In my perspective,

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eaching of

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coordination

and teamwork

skills

are vital for the pupil as these

skills

also

develop them socially. To substantiate, when a

student

interacts with fellow

students

, it helps to make more friends in the school which is important for the development of a society.

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aspect is not taken care while teaching

students

to remain competitive. To illustrate, it is generally seen that in order to be more

competive

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competitive

and study more,

student

remain disconnected from other

students

, which make them socially underdeveloped and ,

thus

,face problems in the later phase of their life. To encapsulate, even though

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ompetition is required for cracking competitive exams, still, I believe

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eaching of

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cooperation

and

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work

is more conducive for

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holistic development of a

student

. You have recently shifted to Australia as an immigrant. Your cousin who lives in your native country is getting married

next

week. He/she has invited you to attend the marriage ceremony but you cannot attend. Write a letter to your cousin. In your letter Wish him/her

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occasion Explain

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him/her the reasons why you cannot come to attend the marriage Invite your cousin to Australia Dear Alan, Congratulation

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brother! I am extremely happy to know that you are engaged. Best of luck for the future dear. Mate, it is

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and I am happy for you that

finally

you are getting married to your girlfriend Liz. She

also

must be on cloud nine. Once again I congratulate both of you for your big day. I know you would feel angry to know that

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will not be able to attend the wedding on 14th

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February

. As you know

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shifted to Sydney

last

month after working so hard to get in

this

country, it would be difficult to again visit India in

such

a short span.

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reason behind

this

is the requirement of the

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visa that I have to stay here for a continuous period of six months. I always wanted to attend and enjoy the wedding but circumstances

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made it impossible.

However

, It would be great if you visit Australia on your honeymoon. I can make all arrangement and bookings in the hotels

ifor

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for

this

. Apart from that, we can

also

meet with each other and celebrate your marriage. Hope you understand my situation and waiting for your reply regarding

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oneymoon. With love Alex