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Nowadays, more and more people are having consumer goods like refrigerators and washing machines. Does this development bring more advantages than disadvantages?

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It is often argued that most of the people around the globe are adapting themselves with the usage of electronics goods over the traditional methods to make their lives easier and compatible. I would like to share my opinion on
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 topic talking about the advantages related to why they have been choosing these consumer goods?
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, in
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 era of artificial intelligence consumer goods are playing a vital role in saving the time and effort of the public from their hectic daily routine.
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 these machines cost a lot when compared to the old fashioned techniques, they are ready to bear the excess which provides a comfortable life.
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, my mom used to toast the bread slices on a pan while I get ready to school. But now, I use a toaster to save my time and effort early in the morning. Either by using a pan or a toaster the result obtained would be the same but I chose a sophisticated way of life.
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, the prices of electronics nowadays have become much cheaper relatively compared to those over the past few decades. As
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, Lowering the cost of
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 equipment made it economical for an individual and could
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 afford them without hesitation.
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, the Government of India is likely to reduce the taxes on the electronic items in the upcoming budget session which is about to release sooner
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 financial year.
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, the taxes imposed on consumer equipment were at 22% in the previous financial year and it is about to get reduced by another 4% making it 18%
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 year.
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 to conclude, by the usage of electronic items the economic growth and development of a country is
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 being defined.
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, it is better to note the advantages these machines have bought rather than discussing the disadvantages of them.
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