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some people think that the internet makes a person more sociable while other think it makes a person less sociable. discuss both views and give your opinion?

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Nowadays, technology rising up in any ages. Most of society spend their time in social
media
 and have thousands of
friends
 while
others
 think it is hard for them to socialise in person. Some people make
friends
 on the internet though it makes
others
 more stay in their own place. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages that cause and give my opinion.
Firstly
,
others
 think that having
this
 social
media
, they can easily make
friends
 with other folk and be more sociable than before.
For instance
, according to the survey, youngsters are more likely get
friends
 in Instagram, Twitter and Facebook than having
friends
 at school,
hence
, they feel accepted by
others
 that they didn't even know. They will meet them and continue their friendship though they are miles away from each other.
On the other hand
, the internet makes a person being introvert, they prefer to be in their own comfort zone.
For example
, children in
this
 era have been observed by a certain group, in their studies,kids would prefer to play 24hours with their computer or gadgets than playing outside with other children.
That is
 why they are less in socializing with
others
 and have fun.
Furthermore
, to balance in using the internet can make our life better, we can be an acquaintance in many people by social
media
 but
also
 it is important to socialize with the true community around you. In conclusion, we can spend a lot of times in social
media
 and socialize with other people but it cannot control the numbers of kids who want to be alone with their gadgets than being outside with
others
.
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