People nowadays are surrounded by all kinds of advertising. Advertising affects what people think is important and it has a negative influence on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that there are various types of advertisements these days for citizens. Some people suppose that it has negative impacts on individual's lives. From my perspective, I totally agree with
this
notion for several reasons. 
To begin
with, there is no doubt
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benefits of
advertising's
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production for customers in the industrialized.
This
way, it supports the community to understand and discover more the information and introduction of the products in many ways,
such
as News, Television, and Music Video.
In other words
, It is beneficial for all society members to have massive information in terms of ingredients, labels, and firms' operations before reaching customers.
For instance
, it is easy to see
the
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marketing programs on
Youtube
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or Facebook, especially
Television
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.
On the other hand
, I would agree that advertisements have few drawbacks, leading to disadvantaged people's lives.
Firstly
, people could not confirm the quality of production through advertising.
Moreover
, it is challenging to check
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elements and operating methods when only watching these brands on social media.
Secondly
, firms are likely to use movie stars' images advertised via personal pages and companies' grand events to approach their fans no matter how suitable for them.
Furthermore
, there are well-known stars' faces for advertising campaigns,
although
they have never utilized any commodities in advance.
For example
, a famous model in Vietnam has been sued by fans in court for advertising
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functional foods, leading to
cause
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serious effects on their health. In conclusion, many options for
this
phenomenon.
However
, I completely totally that advertising affects
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to negative lives of citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Consumer culture
  • Material possessions
  • Idealized lifestyles
  • Unrealistic standards
  • Low self-esteem
  • Privacy concerns
  • Target individuals
  • Technological advancements
  • Health products
  • Public services
  • Free content
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