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Because of the modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays , technology is used more and
as a result
 , handwriting skill is no longer needed , but some individuals consider that the handwriting is still a necessity . I believe , that
such
 an ability should still be learnt by especially children because in certain situations is helpful .
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asier for everyone the communication ,
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 individuals prefer to use the electronic messages to connect with others . There are
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 numerous applications which help users to check their spelling mistakes or even to create a whole work project , with
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eople choose the modern technology over the classic methods . In a recent study carried out a the London university , more than 80% of the students were using their computers for the assignments and researches
On the other hand
 , it is clear that the handwriting is still an important still because is a part of studying and only people who do not attend school for different reasons are not able to do it.
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there are
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 numerous occasions when citizens are required to complete a form by hand and a survey for the Gloucester local council
last
 year presented that 10
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 of the locals required support to fill out a
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 because they
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 know how to write . In conclusion ,
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technology seems to improve everyone's life , the traditional methods of handwriting should still
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 mandatory since
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arly years in school .
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