In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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It is often observed that
students
' misbehaviour are intolerable for
teachers
at schools. Before offering any solution, it is important to discuss the root causes of the problem.
To begin
with, there are a plethora of causes of the disruptive
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of the pupils.
Firstly
,
this
is because of the media which is easily accessible through the Internet. These movies display violent
scences
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scenes
sciences
scene
for which they act aggressively as well as use inappropriate dialogues that they try to imitate.
For instance
, online platforms
such
as Netflix showcase
such
vulgar movies which
students
often watch and are misguided. Added to
this
is probably the physical or verbal abuse of
parents
at home which leads the student to be argumentative with friends or even
teachers
.
As a result
, it is creating havoc for the
teachers
to cooperate with
students
and teach properly. Turning to possible solutions, perhaps the immediate step would be to block the online media for the children.
This
can be done by the
parents
using the parental control option in
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technological devices
such
as
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aptop or smartphone.
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remedy for the ongoing abusive relationship between the
parents
and the
students
may be to counsel the
parents
. To illustrate, a group of researchers revealed that
parents
who are well
counseled
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by the school principals treat their children politely and create
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tronger relationship.
Hence
, it can help build easy interaction between teacher and
students
due to reduced chaos in the class. To conclude,
although
youngsters misbehave due to watching violence in media and abuse from the
parents
, it can be overcome if the aforementioned solutions are adopted. In the future,
teachers
may deliver a workshop for the guidance of
parental
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and communication skills to discuss how to create wonderful bonding between
parents
and their offsprings.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • parental guidance
  • discipline
  • moral guidance
  • social media
  • detrimental
  • bullying
  • peer pressure
  • overcrowded
  • disengagement
  • disruptive behavior
  • behavioral policies
  • code of conduct
  • parental involvement
  • social and emotional learning (SEL)
  • empathy
  • responsible decisions
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