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Some people think that school children should be asked to work individually in class. Others believe that working in small groups is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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ense of team-
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. Some people are in favour of these whilst others have contrast viewpoint.
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 these are vital to imbibe co-operation skills, I believe individual
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 paramount to groom their abilities. On the one side, in
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children
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 with each other and understand the importance of co-ordination which will help them in their future.
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, in later life, they have to
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 in organisations where common goals are pivotal. All employees of the company combine their efforts to achieve
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human is a part of society. If
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 grow, they will be part of a family and nation. They have to make a responsible decision for them as well as others.
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, a common citizen chooses ministers of a nation.
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, teamwork in school will help them in their future and these
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 should be encouraged. On the other side,
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 in which
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 have to
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 alone helps them to be independent. Students do not take any kind of support from others.
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 lead to guide them to be strong and perform tasks with responsibility.
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,these kinds of
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 help mentors to check the actual potential of students who may stay hidden in other
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, teachers may provide wrong grades to efficient students because other
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, individual tasks help to groom skills and exhibit real position of learners. In a nutshell, to survive in
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 competitive domain, a child should be independent and instilled with teamwork abilities. In my perspective, to master
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 both individual and
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 should be performed in educational institutions.
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