Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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udget should be paid on economical construction, while others reckon that other types of development are
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vital for a country. From my point of view, I suppose that
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economic progress is the most important aim. The following essay will discuss both views and prove
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draw a conclusion of my view. On the one hand, people who believe the construction of infrastructure and the protection of
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nvironment are seen to be vital possess the reasons as follow.
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ational defence, mobiles and clean energies. The other considerations tend to be
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revention of climate change and equality in
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society. Alternatively,
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success of a nation can be measured by healthcare, well-being and happiness of its residents.
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, there are still many others
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trongly believe that economic advancement should be the most essential thing for the
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to spend their money on. I
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nfrastructure and healthcare system, enormous funds would be required, which would inevitably put a heavy burden on the
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budget. For those governments who are relatively poor, it is difficult for them to improve other aspects,
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edical system, transportation system and poverty alleviation, and let alone the option to construct those fields.
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conomy should be viewed as the most significant aspect for the
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to make their budget plan. In conclusion, people have different views of whether subsidies on economic progress is worthy, but I believe that economy is the most important one and the basic element that makes up basic development of the whole society, which should be paid the most.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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