The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

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Recent decrement of basic human resources has impacted many sections of
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society. People are facing famine, drought and living in below poverty line. One of the most required element is
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, which is currently at the lower side and resulting in less drinking
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for many.
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is a basic requirement for all
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living beings. In our modern-day world, all the nations are racing to prove who achieving more, whether it is moving towards Industrialization or more aggressive Agricultural methods. Both are the major reasons for higher
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consumption, and
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leading to
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pollution due to
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improper Waste management by many factories.
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, most of these factories dump all the waste into the nearby river bodies, which is used by everyone around the area. And
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particular act converts the
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into a poisonous liquid harmful for consumption.
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, research has shown
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ven though India is at
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ighest growing nation, out 136 crores of
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opulation almost 38% is not able to drink clean
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or
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at all. Just to survive they even drink polluted Agricultural wastage
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, not by choice but to live another day.
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, many reasons are leading to
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detrimental future without proper drinking
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there are certain ways if followed by all our nations together we can save it.
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, awareness of
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water
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, whether by teaching at schools or showing advertisements on televisions. These messages will let everyone know how it can impact a poor man and how it already has around the world.
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, Government campaigns for more economical use of
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for all different projects.
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, Goa is the
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state of India where each and every citizen has pure and clean drinking
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, here the government bodies has sent across the message to the whole nation that how important it is
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to self-help the people of the nation, and
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think about return on investments. And
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, planned sewage treatment, where the waste can be collected, segregated based on properties and
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recycled and used in organic farming. In summary, without
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there will be no race for the survival of the fittest.
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, we have to be more careful with what we do with every drop of it.
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