Advertising is one of the important sources of growing any business.
Although
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any product is necessary for its sale, these ads in today's time
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children
. I completely agree that it should be banned as it has many negative effects on the growing age of
children
.
Firstly
, it could be argued that
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can not be stopped from
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eyes. The growing age of
children
brings about hundreds of questions in their minds which for some reason they do not ask
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anyone but they learn through observations.
However
, it might be possible that something is not
to learn for a child
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it is for a teenager,
such
as always,
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advertisements
. I believe that these types of learning can be done in school at their proper age.
Moreover
, it is not something broadcast on every channel and
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openly.
Secondly
, commercials make our kids more demanding in front of their parents. Most
advertisements
are attractive to adolescent, which means they ask their parents to buy it for them. Even worse, not every parent afford these types of
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or fast food or biscuits
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their kids.
In addition
,
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children
might get offended or feel ashamed that
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is something
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parent can not afford.
Finally
,
although
some ads may have fantasy content, many people,
therefore
, argue that
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informative and knowledgeable. Most
advertisements
that target
children
on confectionary items are not real, but they show more fantasy.
As a result
, many youngsters become complex or they might start these confectionary items as
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need and skip their actual meal. My strongest argument is that the actual meal helped kids to grow stronger not these advertising products.
To sum up
, not only do advertisement makes
children
more demanding but
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also
may convey wrong information to growing
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.
Therefore
, I strongly feel that these
advertisements
should be banned.