Nuclear power is far too dangerous. Therefore, countries should ban its use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources of energy such as hydroelectric power, wind power, and solar energy.

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is widely used. And, of course, there are many advantages to using it. '

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, in my opinion, I have to agree with the statement that it is far too dangerous to be used as a general source of energy. Safety is a big problem. Indeed, if there is ever an accident,

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as the one that happened in the former Soviet Union in recent years, the consequences can be disastrous. '

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, of course, dealing with nuclear waste is a big problem. That only with where and how to store it and how to transport it safely. And once again, should there be an accident whilst the waste is being transported to the storage site, the consequences can be severe indeed. The health of

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and other forms of life that live near

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stations is

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a significant concern. Indeed, we often hear reports of high cancer levels amongst

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who live close to nuclear

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plants.

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we must ask ourselves what effect

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has on the- food chain,

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, if crops, animals, fish, etc., are

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affected, how does

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affect the health of

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who eat

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food?

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, any alternative energy sources are expensive because it is still underdeveloped.

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can seriously affect a country's economy, especially countries whose economies are still' being developed.

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, considering that natural resources

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as coal, oil, and gas may well be depleted not too far into the future, a global effort to improve the efficiency of, say, solar

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is undoubtedly afar better solution than using nuclear fuel. Having considered the issues, I am not in favour of using nuclear

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because of the potential damage of a nuclear accident and the risk to

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's health.

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, I believe more effort should be applied to developing alternative energy sources.

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Nuclear power is far too dangerous. Therefore, countries should ban its use and concentrate instead on developing alternative sources of energy such as hydroelectric power, wind power, and solar energy.

Your opinion

Many young people today spend a lot of time playing electronic game. Is this a positive or negative development?

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the modern era, it is easy to sell, buy and work with others through the internet. But others are against it. Do you think this is a positive trend or a negative trend?

Write about the following topic: The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?