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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or sharing a house with friends. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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In western countries, it is a common norm for the young generation to move out of their parents'
home
 after completing high school or
post graduation
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. They prefer to live with their friends or even better live alone as they can learn to handle things on their own. In my opinion, I believe
this
 is a positive development for the students, thereby transforming them
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 more confident and strong people to handle any
life
 situation, and
thus
 can perform better as adults later. The main positive point for
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teenage children to move out of their childhood
home
 is that it teaches them the importance of money and the need to earn it the right way.
In other words
, they have to handle their expenses, and
thus
 they will end up taking up a part-time job.
This
 will imbibe in them the value of money and the
hardwork
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hard work
 needed to earn income.
For instance
, most of the graduate students work as an intern or take up a temporary job to save and pay for their semester fees which shows the importance of savings and finance. The other beneficial point for school graduates to move with their friends is that they learn to share things with whom they stay, face
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real
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life
 and deal with the obstacles in a constructive way.
Additionally
, they need to handle all the household chores, pay the bills in time, maintain a tidy
home
, and at the same time learn to excel in academics.
Thus
 they get to know time management,
that is
, manage work and study parallelly.
Therefore
 youngsters emerge as successful adults who can handle their
life
 remarkably once they complete their college. In conclusion, I believe it is highly advisable that children should leave the
home
 where they used to stay and experience the actual
life
 to gain more insight about handling unusual situations and overcoming it with stupendous talent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • self-reliance
  • financial responsibility
  • social isolation
  • housing demand
  • personal growth
  • financial strain
  • problem-solving
  • decision-making skills
  • disrupt
  • support networks
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