Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.

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"Importing and exporting of products"

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paly

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a major role in every

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around the world.

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, some

people

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say that there is a positive because it helps in

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ountry's development. I disagree with the claim, and in

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following essay, I shall submit my argument in support of my view.

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with, in my view if a

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is being manufactured, developed and maintained in

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ative

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its relatively cheaper for the local's to buy. Whereas, if the

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product

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is exported to

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eighbour

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it would be expensive because, the consumer would be charged for import

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, and

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luxury

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, and the registration of the

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that would increase the price

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furthermore

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, in Australia

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usually pay

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ax of 13

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on the

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for their purchase, now

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suppose if they had to import a car for another

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and they had to pay 13% more

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becaus

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because

they are bringing a

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foreign

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in to

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the

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, if

people

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by the

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the

signifance

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significance

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would be increased and

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would be

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hugh

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huge

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unnecessary for the

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, which would result in

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omplete waste of money. In a nutshell, on what's discussed

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the above essay. I clearly say that it would be

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egative development because the native products that are made would

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their value in the market.

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economic crisis

people

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should be

enopuraged

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encouraged

to buy local products and they could be offered discount or incentives.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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248 words

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