in a number of countries,some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

Wild
animals
are kept in
zoos
all over the world. At present,
zoos
are a tourist attraction in many countries and need wild creatures to attract visitors. I believe that wild
animals
should not be kept in
zoos
and there should be an alternative
place
to see them. There are many good reasons to not build
zoos
in our cities.
First
of all, god's precious gifts need to live in their natural habitat.
Furthermore
,
zoos
are no
place
for wild things. If
animals
need to be cared for, they should be looked after in their natural habitat in game parks or wildlife reserves. Governments should look after the precious wild
animals
at their country and should close down
zoos
that profit for them. Another valid reason to support
this
view is that people can see wild
animals
on the internet, or in books. They don't need to visit them in cages where they are sick or dying.
Moreover
, these
zoos
try to make money from
animals
misery and they don't care about the
animals
' welfare.
However
, some people believe that
zoos
are a good
place
for
animals
. Wild
animals
can be protected there and will avoid becoming extinct. It is a good
place
to educate children about wild things and
also
experience
animals
behaviour.
In addition
to
this
,it is
also
a positive way to earn money for tourism.
For example
, in Sydney, many tourists frequently visit Taronga zoo. In conclusion, people believe that
zoos
are good places to keep wild
animals
, I feel that we do not need
zoos
anymore. We can look at wild
animals
on the internet or travel there and we can be happy for these wild creatures. We must close all
zoos
in the future.
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