More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

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there has been a noticeable shift towards a lifestyle that resulted in numerous health problems. Unfortunately, these conditions cannot be treated by the means of modern

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, so it is believed by some that only traditional

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could help tackle

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issue. Personally, I do not subscribe to

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point of view, as

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not only lacks the proof of its effectiveness

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ertain threat to those making use of it.

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, there is little scientific evidence that traditional

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could effectively target the diseases related to a contemporary lifestyle. Scientific methods of our time depend heavily on thorough research, and it is immature to take ancient

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-related ideas for granted.

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, some Russian people claim that obesity could be cured by drinking parsley juice,

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there is no evidence that

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has any effect on body fat (unless parsley is the sole component of one’s diet).

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, since traditional

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is not backed up by scientific data, its positive effect could not be guaranteed as opposed to conventional

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.

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, those

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traditional

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tend to ignore its possible dangers, especially when it comes to treating conditions that are considered

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.

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sometimes leads to additional health problems and might even pose threat to life.

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, people in Scandic countries use poisonous mushrooms for stress management, yet there have been reported cases of permanent brain damage due to these practices.

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, without proper knowledge patients could get more harm from traditional

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rather than

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enefit. To sum up, traditional

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is considered neither effective nor safe by modern science.

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recent changes in lifestyle are believed to be the cause of certain untreatable health problems, I see no point in relying on traditional

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. In my opinion, it would be better if society invested more resources in medical research

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in order to address these issues.