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It is the fact that people nowadays are under a lot of pressure and their lives are becoming increasingly stressful. What could be the possible reasons for this? What are some solutions to address this issue?

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These days many people are being under a lot of pressing factors and their daily routine is getting progressively distressing.
This
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life
 quality deteriorate.
This
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tressful
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amily issue. Family is the most part of our
life
. You're spending your whole
life
 and sharing memories with them, no matter bad or good memories they are. These bad situations could
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your relationship with family and to your mental health. The
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 school and work. These two factors are
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ife of each person.
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 must learn and study too much information for your future work.
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 school routine can affect negatively on
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tudent. There is no problem in the world that don't have
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olution.
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family therapy and psychologist to solve family problems.
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, we must learn to manage our time and make
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lan for each day of the week. In conclusion, we can fix our school, work problems with help of plans and It would economy our time and reduce
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evel of stress.
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