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In some countries, there are fewer young people who listen to or play classical music these days. Why is this? Should young people be encouraged to play or perform classical music?

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In certain nation’s, nowadays, young
adults
 listening to or playing traditional
music
 are less.
This
 is mainly due to the lack of
knowledge
on
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of
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 classical
music
.
However
, we should encourage our young generation to learn it as it represents our
ancestors
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ancestor's
ancestors'
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music
. The most evident reason why adolescents, who
listens
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 to or plays classical
music
 are less, is inadequate
knowledge
 about it.
In other words
, it is not known to most of the young
adults
 around the world. Because modern
music
 has influenced our young
adults
 to the most extent, they hardly know about
the
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traditional
music
. Take my cousin
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,
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for example
, he was trained to do rapping from childhood, and he does not have any
knowledge
on
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 classical
music
. If he was taught about it, he would have had performed it now.
However
, we should encourage young people to learn classical
music
 which enriches our culture and heritage. One way to encourage young
adults
 to learn classical
music
 would be introducing
music
 classes in their school as a part of extracurricular activities, which not only give them the opportunity for those who are interested to learn traditional
music
 but
also
 preserves our culture for future generations. To illustrate, most of the schools in India has introduced
music
 classes in
s
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chool curriculum for young
adults
, where they learn to play and perform classical
music
 from well-experienced teachers. In conclusion,
although
 young people do not have enough
knowledge
on
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 classical
music
 today, they should be encouraged to learn by introducing
music
 classes as a part of their school curriculum.
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