Some people believe that young people who commit serious crimes，such as a robbery or a violent attack should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Convicts below the legal
age
should be punished as adults for serious violations Use synonyms
such
as theft , physical assault and so on. We completely agree with the aforesaid statement and we will share a few pointers to support our view in the below essay.
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To begin
with, the law of bifurcation on the basis of legal Linking Words
age
is providing a safe haven to most of the convicts. The law states that a convict below a certain Use synonyms
age
is to be treated as minor and should not be punished as adults irrespective of the misdeed he has committed. Use synonyms
For example
, in a recent case in India, an individual went to a reformatory Linking Words
instead
of prison because he was two months younger to the legal Linking Words
age
of eighteen years. Use synonyms
Thus
, these rules are being misused by the criminals to avoid jail terms and are being used as a safety umbrella.
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Furthermore
, in a criminal case, the motive and the way it was carried out is primarily important as compared to the Linking Words
age
of the individual. Use synonyms
Hence
, releasing a criminal on the basis of his Linking Words
age
would be an injustice to the person with whom the evil has been committed. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the sentencing should be done on the account of the crime alone. To illustrate Linking Words
this
, in India a person hires a teenager for murdering his business partner since the boy can't be sentenced to jail and will be released. So, the administrative authorities should focus more on the background of the individual and the crime than sentencing based on a number of years the person is.
To conclude, criminals should be punished based on the crime they have committed and not on their Linking Words
age
. Since Use synonyms
such
rules provide a safety net from the jail term and promote teenage lawlessness.Linking Words
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