The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

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Today global
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have been rapidly as well as
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increasing since
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atal obstacle for every nation of the world.
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has been created
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isturbance and panic situation among the community. In
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well as its issues. Global
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has increased considerably may be due to several causes. To commence with, increased life expectancy in the twenty-
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nowadays to live longer.
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these days are more educated and
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so they spend more money on it with the various instruments.
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almost all
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have various kind of health insurance to secure their health without any financial problems so today many couples have more than 2 or 3 children’s even they are very well educated.
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, medical insurance and free healthcare facility
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provided security in terms of social as well as financial prospects.
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population
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is the biggest problem for mankind. Majority of
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have lived in
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world countries where they have been suffering troubles like poverty and unemployment. There may be no sufficient resources to meet their demand so various crimes are increasing in
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society.
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, our mother nature has limited resources to accomplish and fulfils today
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’s demand so It creates unfaith towards official’s system that cause
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live under the fear and insecurity and in the end, it will turn into the blood war, antisocial activities and various riots. In conclusion, the increase the global
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is caused by numerous
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to achieve basics requirements of life and it leads towards the dark and danger.
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