Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Now with the advancement of
technology
people are able to monitor with their action and words so many believe that it has drawbacks. Today, people use lots of smart devices in their
life
for routine
work
, leisure
activity
as well as social purpose.
Technology
has pros and cons.
However
, I support the positive side of
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technology
because it has many benefits. To commence with, there
are
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ample reason to support my view.
Firstly
, it is very helpful to reduce, control and solving various criminal and antisocial
activity
.
Technology
can reach every corner of the world so it will solve numerous problems. In
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rban area
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most of
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remises have been install CCTV camera due to monitor and reduce any suspicious
activity
.
For example
, police can solve any criminal case and find the criminal with
this
technology
and stop
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amage of any property as well as lives
also
.
Moreover
,
technology
also
helps to increase
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roductivity of the company. When workers know that they have been observed on camera they involve in their
work
only rather than doing any unnecessary things.
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, in
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iamond industry most of the
work
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mployee are engaged with their
work
, they will get more production and workers get more rewards.
On the contrary
, it is
also
undeniable that
technology
is breaking our privacy.it
also
responsible for many crimes. Some anti-social elements do lots of criminal
activity
such
as kidnapping, theft and blackmail.
Moreover
, many misuse technologies to earn money and just for fun.
For example
, they leak private photos, chats and videos.
However
, it can solve by few steps of precaution as well as self-awareness. To conclude, the
dvancement
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advancement
of
technology
makes our
life
comfortable and convenient without its
life
almost impossible but it is
also
the solid medium of track our personal
life
.
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