With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvatages of this trend?

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carry a
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electronic device that
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emerging trend in readers, which most of them.prefer is an
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I shall discuss both advantages and disadvantages in
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and ancient
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literature
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documents
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who is reading. but
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is that they are so bulky and heavy to carry, since
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because
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on thick-sheet of
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online because of encoding
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computer language.
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Secondly
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also
started like online
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Magazine
December 2020 edition" stated that there is a positive surge in the online
book
readers. Most of them are happy to carry their
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and
also
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Nevertheless
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one
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advantages
of the
e-
book
is that they are easy to carry and there are millions of
books
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available
to download and read them later offline.
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even though
there are more
paper
books
, we couldn't be able to carry more than
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ook for themselves and they have been paying
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thousands
thousand
of dollars for every year.
In contrast
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e-
book
application
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available
which has only
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time
payment premium pass for all the
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available
for free. In a
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bove discussion I clearly say that e-
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already started dominating the
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ook would be
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