Economic growth is the only way to end world poverty. However, some people say it leads to enviroment damage and should be stopped. To what extent do you agree?

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There has been much discussion revolving around if being economically healthy is the only way to stop penury across different nations, or if it is only deplorable to the environment. Speaking for myself, it is indeed the only way to stop impoverishment; I would like to express points fairly in
this
essay as to why. Some
people
say that poverty is caused by a decline in economic growth. 13.5 billion
people
are experiencing impoverishment,
this
clearly accounts for 22% of the population around the globe;
This
may be crossed out if all the countries become globally competitive to join globalization, in which there will be a trade of
products
, services and
people
. New of these aforementioned things would greatly contribute to an increase in economic growth.
For instance
,
the
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hilippines
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Philippines
is one of the developing countries worldwide. Filipinos may opt to exchange
products
from other nations where these goods cost cheaper;
This
will help them save a percentage of money, thereby, increasing economic
sability
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stability
ability
; and
therefore
giving end to poverty.
However
, some
people
say that
such
improvement in
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conomy would only cause
the natural resources destruction
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the destruction of the natural resources
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.
This
is mainly due to an inclination in
products
. Increasing
products
would mean increasing wastes and pollution. To illustrate, a rise in
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umber of
products
' packaging from abroad could block the sewages when thrown. We could not
also
guarantee if these goods would cause a great peril to the environment. We may always choose to opt which is better for us, humans. I firmly believe that economic growth would suffice in ending poverty and that we may control human activities which could lead to
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lesser environmental damage.
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