People today general have better lives than people in the past did. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that in the contemporary world, the advent of technology has made everything easier in comparison to the old days

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, I partially agree with the above-stated notion of being

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people were in the past.

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essay shall highlight various aspects that have influenced us nowadays

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with some examples. To commence with, gyrating advancement in machinery has made it easy to do work.

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is because the required

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the energy, is reduced using them.

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, it used to take ladies to take 3-4 hours to wash the

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today they just have to put all that material in a machine and just wait, using that time in some other chores. Moving

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, the production of

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has even made it more comfortable to not only build and remain in contact with our kith and kins but to learn as well. For

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instance, my mother has learnt

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how to speak

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agent only. But if it had been the ancient

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have appeared challenging to do. What is more, the mode of communication has improved a lot. Where folks had travelled too long,

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has become possible to reach a far point in less time.

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of the invention of good engines and

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of a vehicle. To clarify, we could reach America in 24 hours

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assistance from an aeroplane.

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modern approach has made us more unhappy.

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an increase in the cost of every daily need

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. It is quite evident that stuff which could be bought at a price of a rupee

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is

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hundred times costlier

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we used to get at ten rupees per

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is now sold at fifty. Adding

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, individuals had a good social life

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have virtual friends in their social media accounts

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nobody to help them.

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could be because of spending too much time on their jobs

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they almost lose the bond with others. To specify, my grandfather always worked from ten to

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after which he used to invest him in his friends

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some connections in the community

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,it is completely opposite presently. In conclusion,

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demerits.

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, many things have proved to be a boon,

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we have lost many at the same rate