Some think Government spending on Infrastructure (Transport, Housing etc) is considered the most important for a nation. While others believe that Education, Health and HR values to be more important areas for government expenditure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The world is evolving at a fast pace today and if proper amenities like

infrastructure

education

and healthcare are not provided to the public,

then

we might end up being stagnant in the phase of evolution. I firmly believe that

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the government must spend enough, on both housing and

education

equally for the nation to prosper as a whole. In

this

essay, I shall discuss why both the points are important for a nation's growth, and are inter-dependent, as per my knowledge.

Firstly

, let's see what might be the consequences if more money is spent on

infrastructure

rather than on intangible areas

such

as values and ethics. Without guided morals and

education

, we might not have a broadened horizon for our future.

Conseqently

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Consequently

, that would lead us to not having a great vision for

modern day

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infrastructure

As a result

, the plan of having easier modes of transport or a better way of living

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might fail.

For instance

, if we don't study hard enough to understand, every aspect of development in our society, we might end up building poor structures which, in turn

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might put people in grave situations.

Secondly

, if conventional frameworks are used in the country,

then

there would be no desire to rise up

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since we would be caught up in the

mundance

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mundane

lifestyle.

Additionally

, there would be no motivation for the young bright minds to better their future.

Hence

, the country would not prosper and remain static. In conclusion, I think that

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a better

infrastructure

gives rise to better

education

and morals and vice-versa and the government should invest in both these areas

judiciosly

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judiciously

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Fully explain your ideas

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Medical professionals such as doctors or nurses from poorer countries often migrate to richer countries to work. What problems arise from this situation? What measures can be taken to deal with it?

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?