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Some think Government spending on Infrastructure (Transport, Housing etc) is considered the most important for a nation. While others believe that Education, Health and HR values to be more important areas for government expenditure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The world is evolving at a fast pace today and if proper amenities like
infrastructure
,
education
 and healthcare are not provided to the public,
then
 we might end up being stagnant in the phase of evolution. I firmly believe that
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 the government must spend enough, on both housing and
education
 equally for the nation to prosper as a whole. In
this
 essay, I shall discuss why both the points are important for a nation's growth, and are inter-dependent, as per my knowledge.
Firstly
, let's see what might be the consequences if more money is spent on
infrastructure
 rather than on intangible areas
such
 as values and ethics. Without guided morals and
education
, we might not have a broadened horizon for our future.
Conseqently
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Consequently
, that would lead us to not having a great vision for
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infrastructure
.
As a result
, the plan of having easier modes of transport or a better way of living
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 might fail.
For instance
, if we don't study hard enough to understand, every aspect of development in our society, we might end up building poor structures which, in turn
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might put people in grave situations.
Secondly
, if conventional frameworks are used in the country,
then
 there would be no desire to rise up
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 since we would be caught up in the
mundance
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mundane
 lifestyle.
Additionally
, there would be no motivation for the young bright minds to better their future.
Hence
, the country would not prosper and remain static. In conclusion, I think that
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 a better
infrastructure
 gives rise to better
education
 and morals and vice-versa and the government should invest in both these areas
judiciosly
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judiciously
.
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