Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species. Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem. Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give our opinion.
Nature
is considered as the
integral part of the ecosystem. All living organisms Change the article
an
relay
on their Correct your spelling
rely
habitants
for survival. In recent times, Correct your spelling
habitats
every
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on p
lant has faced consequences of Add an article
the
nature
such
as climate change, most of the harm that's done to nature
is caused by humans and as
a
resultCorrect the article-noun agreement
apply
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,
animals
that depend on nature
are facing problems. This
topic has became
highly Change the verb form
become
debateable
topic. In the following Correct your spelling
debatable
eassy
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essay
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,
thus
conclude with a possiable
solution.
On the Correct your spelling
possible
one
hand, some people
say that must of the harm is already done, and some rare plant
and animal species are extient
now, which Correct your spelling
extinct
extent
in
particularly plies to orchid Correct your spelling
is
plant
and only grows in a rainforest and kiwi an
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animals
an animal
animals
that's
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that are
alreday
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already
becaming
endangered life which only eats plants and herbs.
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becoming
On the other hand
, some people
say that it's not too late to take precautions and to control the damage by only swithching
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switching
in to
solar energy, which reduces the Join the words
into
green house
gas effects. Correct your spelling
greenhouse
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Furthermore
every
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everyone
one
should be taught about recycling the waste rather than dumping in to
rubbish which Join the words
into
specillay
includes plastic, which would Correct your spelling
specially
especially
effect
the sea life. Correct your spelling
affect
For instance
, a documentary by National Georgraphic
channel telecasted a program about the sea life, which shows that Correct your spelling
Geographic
mammels
consider that thrash as food and eat them and die, due to digestion and the wastage becomes a topic, to Correct your spelling
mammals
eleborate
there is a movie named Wall-e which has a message that earth would be Correct your spelling
elaborate
evcuated
because it's no longer suitable for human survival and all trees and Correct your spelling
evacuated
animals
become extent. In order to avoid this
situationAdd a comma
,
every
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everyone
one
should be taught about the environment and how to protect it.
People
should be educated to reduce the
waste and Remove the article
apply
also
plant
more plants, and also
learn to protect the animal species. More over
, in some countries have already taken a stand forward in doing public Correct your spelling
Moreover
awarness
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awareness
for example
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,
offically
declared that any suburb that plants more trees, would be Correct your spelling
officially
eligable
for good tax Correct your spelling
eligible
benfits
.
To conclude, Correct your spelling
benefits
people
may vary in their opinion. I strongly believe that what happened is past, now every
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everyone
one
should learn improtance
of Correct your spelling
importance
nature
and animals
species, this
could be only done with the help of news and social awarness
camps.Correct your spelling
awareness
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