Some people argue that holding sporting events is beneficial to countries’ development. However other people hold the opposite opinion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are different ideas among the people which some of them believe executing sporting incidents is advantageous for improving the condition of the country, while the others exert these

events

are not beneficial as they seem to be. In

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both views will be discussed and my idea is expressed at the end. On one hand, some parts of society claim that sporting

events

result in making benefits for states either in economic or social welfare. These people believe positive impacts outweigh the negatives and totally the development will be caught as

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inal result. These

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can bring enormous tourists to cities and the tourists may pay for services

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accommodations, foods, museums and so on. Better quality of services will be paid more and earning of citizens will be increased more.

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, residents may face new people with various cultures and thoughts that they can compare their situations against others. The opponents of

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irst view allege these occurrences are not useful and cannot lead to developing since the incidents execute one time in a decade and

last

some few days. They assert

although

some financial improvements are made and new buildings and stadiums are constructed, some threats

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and ignoring domestic cultures will

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. The advocates of

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idea believe in stabilizing of traditions either in social or construction styles and resisting against changes. They think the development shall achieve in an isolated environment by their local persons and without to be affected by foreign communities. In my honest suggestion, holding cultural ceremonies

such

as music

events

, film festivals and ecotourism should be increased by incremental needs of its’ fans during a year in order to balance the number of sporting or social occurrences. It can excite all categories of society and be useful for all types of ages. To conclude, by increasing the number of competitions are

hold

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all over the world, the opposite group have to accept and

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themselves with the things that admitted by

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arge part of

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niverse. There is no alternative to postpone the globalization or ban the boundaries in order to eliminate or, at least, reduce the

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of tourists’ entrances

as a result

of

events

.