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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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It is said that
music
 is able to unite inhabitants from all over the world, regardless of their distinguishing features in ages and cultures. I completely agree with
this
 statement and I will provide some reasons.
To begin
 with,
music
 is able to evoke a wide range of feelings and emotions to connect all
people
 through various nations. A good example of it can be the performance of ´KISS´ rock group in 2020 in Dubai, where all individuals partook in
this
 concert and heard smashing and unforgettable sounds of favourite songs. There were
people
 from the USA, the UK, Spain and Russia.
Consequently
, we may see the close bond between all these
people
 owing to
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esire to be immersed
into
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 the melody atmosphere.
Moreover
,
music
 plays a vital role in
people
’s lives owing to their desire to listen to a plethora of various
music
 styles like classical, rock, jazz, hip-hop and pop, despite the drastic differences in ages. Listening to melodies or songs for all
people
 mean that they can find a bit of solace and consolation.
For instance
, for elderly
people
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,
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different styles aren’t rocket science to listen to the same styles as for youngsters. Because these generations understand the main idea and meaning of
this
music
 language due to the body gestures and emotional vibe. Eventually, we can’t see any distinctions from these age groups. By and large, as we can’t deny that powerful
music
that is
 able to bind all
people
 of cultural sectors and ages together. (250 words)
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • universal language
  • evoke
  • connect
  • diverse audiences
  • cultural exchange
  • generational gaps
  • shared experiences
  • unifying force
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