Some governments spend a lot of public money training up individuals to be successful in international sporting events. Some people believe that this money should be spent on things that will benefit the general public instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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players using Use synonyms
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overnment should think about the whole nation and should use the budget on some important factors Add an article
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ducation of poor Add an article
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. These days there are many individuals who are under the poverty line and they cannot afford Use synonyms
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their education. Verify preposition usage
apply
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society. Illiteracy rate can be increased which can Verify preposition usage
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affects
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hole economy in a negative way. To Illustrate, Change the article
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people
pay a lot of taxes every year, so it is public Use synonyms
money
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overnment should return it to Add an article
the
people
to benefit them Use synonyms
such
as paying school fee of poor children.
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Secondly
, authorities should use public Linking Words
money
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the
public places. It can help Remove the article
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people
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ibrary, related to computer or guiding Add an article
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and Use synonyms
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who can get access to different books which they may need for their leisure time or for their study or career. Use synonyms
Moreover
, building factories and other businesses will help Linking Words
people
to find jobs.
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Government
spend Use synonyms
money
to train Use synonyms
sports
players, help them win Use synonyms
sports
events which is very good for the nation's fame. Use synonyms
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Olympic games, authorities pay huge to train them so that players can Linking Words
enchanted
country's status by winning. Change the verb form
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government
pay millions of dollars only for entertainment purposes. Winning gold medals does not help Use synonyms
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ountry's development.
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overnment should Add an article
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. It is great to pay on Use synonyms
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but public issues should not be undervalued because the development is based on the whole population of a country, not only based on Use synonyms
sports
and games.Use synonyms
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