The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to have one language in the world?

As globalization has increased the requirement for communicating worldwide has become an important issue. Some
people
think that
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as an international
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believe it will be
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disadvantageous
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both point of views and I would put forth my opinion as well.
English
as a required subject all over the world will have
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seful impact on making
people
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cross the
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boundaries
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easily and they can go overseas for
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etter understanding of their
language
and culture.
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, many Indians go to International universities for higher studies and eventually start their work and settled over there.
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omfortable life in the destination continent.
On the other hand
, if students only focus on
English
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tongue
,
consequently
many local
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dialects
have been extincted. Hindi,
for example
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ew million
people
in the whole world and seems to disappear in the near future.
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, Hindu culture might disappear, if
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continue
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language
. In my opinion,
people
should use one
language
for promoting globalization for saving humanity, and simultaneously they should remember their local cultures too. In conclusion,
English
as an international
language
has the benefit of changing many lives;
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, it is undeniable that they are forgetting their regional languages. According to my point of view, it is
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etter choice to maintain both local and international
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Prominent
  • Contribute
  • Global
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Communication
  • Understanding
  • Ease
  • Business
  • Trade
  • Cultural exchange
  • Unity
  • Access
  • Information
  • Simplify
  • Travel
  • Tourism
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