Hello buddy! you would be pleased to know that I am getting married and I am writing this letter to you to invite on this occasion.

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Dear Alan, Hello buddy! you would be pleased to know that I am getting married and I am writing

this

letter to you to invite

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you on

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this

occasion. Talking about my partner, she is one of my colleagues in the office and we have been working together in the same team for 3 years. She is very smart and lively and I love her company. After a relationship for all these years, we

finally

have decided to tie a knot. The wedding is scheduled to be taken place

month on the 14th of March

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my home town New Delhi. I want to let you know well in time so that you can take a leave and book a flight to India from the UK. I will take care of your staying arrangement here, don't worry about

this

. As she is

also

Indian, we both have agreed to get married in Indian traditions and customs. It would be a good chance for you to enjoy the Indian marriage. Apart from

this

, you will love to see various rituals and functions performed prior to the wedding day. Hope to see you soon. With love Lovish

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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