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Some parents believe that their children should do educational activities during their free time. Others say that in this way children are under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some mothers and fathers argue that
kids
 should take part in educational
activities
 while they are free, others believe that
children
 would feel stress if they are not allowed to go outside.
Although
 institutional
activities
 help
children
 in school, I believe physical exercise is more important for them to stay healthy and fit. On the one hand, taking part in educational
activities
 help
children
 in school.
This
 is to say that when students participate in any kind of educational activity they get to learn general knowledge that helps
kids
 in their examinations in schools.
For example
, a recent report of the news article revealed that students who participate in a different type of educational
activities
 perform better in examinations than the students who do not take any part in that kind of
activities
.
However
, I believe that physical exercise is more important because a lack of physical activity leads to
health
 problems.
On the other hand
,
kids
 who get involved in physical games are stronger and fit.
This
 is because they play outdoor games that benefit them and they are less likely to face
health
 problems when they get old.
However
, those adolescents who do not do any physical activity get obese in their life later and that leads to serious
health
 conditions,
such
 as diabetes and heart problems and
this
 put strain on
health
 service and the not only patient suffers but their family
also
 suffer.
For instance
, the
health
 department of the University of Karachi study reported that in their journal
last
 year that young
kids
 who do not participate in physical
activities
 in their childhood are 27% more likely to get a heart attack when the get forty than those who regularly participate in outdoor games. I believe that it is a better idea to encourage young
children
 to play outdoor. In conclusion, while some parents think that
kids
 should participate in institutional
activities
, others say that
children
 get stressed by
this
. I believe that
children
 should be encouraged to go outside.
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