Some people think high school graduates should travel or work for a period instead of going directly to study at university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both approaches. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The approach of

people

towards

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ducation system has been changed

now a days

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nowadays

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. It has

became

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become

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more flexible compared to the past. Some

people

think that it is better for the young

people

to take a break from their

studies

before

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in to

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the

university

studies

, in the sense of going for a long trip or engage in some works.

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, both approaches have

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own advantages and disadvantaged , which will analyse through

this

essay. On the one hand, as per the views of some

people

, it is

betteer

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better

to go for

a travel

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travel

a journey

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or do some work before the

university

studies

.They argue that

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school

life

is a full- time job, students are

over burden

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overburden

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with continuous lessons and

home work

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homework

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. A gap year may provide a rest period for the students and enhance them to relax from their routine

life

.

However

, it has some negative impacts too. taking a gap from

studies

may provoke the young

children

to deviate from their regular

studies

.

For example

, most of the

children

refuse to go back to their

studies

because the earning they get from their work and

excitment

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excitement

they experience out of the travel.

On the other hand

, with the contrast to the above view, some

people

think that it is better for the young buds to continue their

university

studies

with out

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without

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any gap from the school

studies

.They state that

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by continuing the

studies

young

people

become more independent and responsible in their

life

by achieving good knowledge and professional status .

For instance

,

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academically qualified

people

will have a good social status than their peer group , who are not

thats

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that

that's

much qualified .Even though there

is

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advantages , there

is

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disadvantages too for

this

approach. Students would not get adequate time to enjoy their teenage

life

and in some cases

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,

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they have to depart from their family in their younger ages for their

studies

.

As a result

, they may feel lonely and stressed . In conclusion ,

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agree with the

second

group of

people

that ,

children

should continue their

university

studies

soon after

gratuate

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graduate

graduated

from their school.Indeed, there is a long way ahead for the

children

to get relaxed and enjoy their

life

after achieving academic qualification and

finacial

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financial

status . The demerits of

this

view can be solved by proper

guidence

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guidance

and support.