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Many students are taught to push themselves to try and be better than other students, rather than work together for everyone's benefits. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Undeterred hard
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 and the determination to achieve a goal always
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 the desired results.
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 cooperation among
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 is advised to benefit everyone, many of them are encouraged to put their best efforts and compete with their peers to excel in whatever they do. They can learn the value of the efforts needed to achieve something, gain self-confidence but there are
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 certain drawbacks that are to be taken into account. On the one hand, one benefit of pushing
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 to
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 harder is that they know the amount of hard
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 needed to reach their aim.
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, the more effort they put in, the more they
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 a skill, the better they become.
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, high school graduates prepare for almost a year and compete in the technical examinations to secure a seat for themselves in a top-notch college. Another advantage of competing with their classmates is that they are being taught how to have a healthy competition without having to hate or have grudge upon them.
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 imbibes them with the confidence
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 needed to run life as adults at
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ater point in time.
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, both competition and relentless effort
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 required for them to succeed later in society and
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orkforce as adults.
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, one problem when
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 are taught to be
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 is that they fail to know
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enefits of cooperation. As people, we do not live,
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 or socialise apart from others, so learning how to
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along side
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alongside
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 other people ought to be taught from childhood. Teachers and
students
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 should take
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responsibility
 to teach them the
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 values of cooperating with their peers.
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 never-ending Covid situation, many pharmaceutical companies came forward to have
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ie-up with their opponents to create an effective vaccine which could subside the rising number of cases. In conclusion, while learners can benefit from outstanding efforts without having to cooperate with others, they can
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 lack in areas of cooperating and getting the
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 done.

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