Some people think they have right to use as much freshwater as they want. Others believe governments should tightly control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource. Discuss both views and give your option.

Generally speaking, natural

water

is being depleted

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an unprecedented rate at the moment due to being used excessively by humans. While some consider that

water

belongs to the public so they can

use

it unlimited, other insist that it is necessary for

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overnment to implement a restrict

control

over

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water

utilization as it is a finite

resource

. In my opinion, I maintain that we should

use

water

cautiously

otherwise

we will suffer from the shortage in the future. One the one hand, some assert that

water

should be accessible by all

people

as it belongs to the general public. Some

people

use

this

resource

freely without

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of a negative consequence. To clarify, a

water

shortage problem might be out of sight so it is out of

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ind of

people

in rich nations, and as a consequence, they do not realize the importance of

water

conservation.

For instance

, providing

that citizens

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that never experience and suffer from

water

scarcity, they might feel it is unnecessary to

use

water

carefully.

However

, I would suggest that it is the government’s responsibility to educate their

people

about how precious the

water

is

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and to implement strict rules to

control

the amount of

water

used by households as it is

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imited

resource

.

On the other hand

, it is often argued that

water

is

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carce

resource

and it is predicted that 80% of

water

available will be consumed in the

next

40 years.

Therefore

, it is essential for a government to monitor and thoroughly manage the

use

of

water

by imposing stricter laws.

For example

, imagine that every household in Thailand is limited an amount of

water

used not exceeding 100 to 300 baths a month,

although

they are willing to pay more in order to

use

water

unlimited.

Consequently

, the country can reduce

water

utilization and preserve it for the

next

generation. It seems to me that it is important for the government to tightly

control

the

use

of

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to make sure that it will be available for our offspring. In conclusion,

although

fresh

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water

is

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atural

resource

which all

people

have a right to get access freely, individual should be aware of the value of

water

and make a judicious

use

. I would maintain that the most effective way we can preserve freshwater to our

next

generation is to impose tight

control

on the

use

of

water

.