Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.

Nevertheless

,

music

plays and

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ital role in

society

. A segment of

society

believes that

music

plays a vital role in

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ndividual's

life

.

However

, other opine that it is simply a

form

of

entertainment

. I would like to delve both arguments before forming an opinion.

To begin

with, the

first

and foremost

music

is vital for

society

.

Music

can raise

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ndividual's mood,get them excited and make them calm and relaxed. Allows us to feel all emotions that we experienced in our

life

.

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to

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it is

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mportant part of an individual's

life

and fills need and urge of

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ndividual's

life

.

Thus

music

is vital for

society

.

On the other hand

,

music

is simply a

form

of

entertainment

.

Music

is played in parties and ceremonies to entertain.

In addition

to

this

when people came home after hectic days work they need some

entertainment

and they play

music

.

Hence

music

is simply a

form

of

entertainment

. In conclusion,

music

is not only used for

entertainment

but

also

it is vital for

society

.

music

help

society

to reveal stress,anxiety etc in the

form

of

entertainment

.