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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The globalization of the world enhances
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communication between the people who come from
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ifferent region.
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 of
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 (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. In my opinion, I believe that these
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skills
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 are equally important. On the one hand, these
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complementary for each other. A lot of research illustrates that
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language
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 another aspect.
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 sentence pattern and connecting word can put in writing.
On the other hand
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communication. Listening is vital for us to understand others ideal during the converse. Speaking is critical to express opinions. Reading is crucial for getting the message and knowledge in written form and writing is important to give
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communication. In conclusion, I believe that the
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complementary for others and each one
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 avoidable in the real condition.
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