While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Global warming and
deforestation
are hot environmental topics in
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resent
world
. Global warming is the effect of increasing
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temperature
due to various facts.
Deforestation
is decreasing the forests throughout the
world
, mainly due to human activities. They have become major environmental issues
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and some say that
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global warming is the worst and the others say that it is the
deforestation
that we have to address
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immediately
.
However
, my point of view is that those are mutual facts and both the problems are critical. Let us look at some points about
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situations.
Earth
is the only known planet with
life
so far. There are
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ot of
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reasons
to be the
earth
is only of it's kind,
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among
them the
temperature
of the
earth
atmosphere is a key reason. As the
earth
is having optimum
temperature
for the
life
,
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of our
world
is truly amazing. Any change to
this
optimum
temperature
will affect badly to
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life
on
earth
. But ongoing research shows that our
world
is warming up
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ecade after a decade.
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that the burning of fossil fuel is one of the vital
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for
this
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phenomena
. Which will emit
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gases to the environment, that will trap the heat of the sun inside our atmosphere. Other than
this
, there are various other human activities
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upports global warming. If we do nothing to prevent
this
, the results will be in a wide range starting from high rising sea level to
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extinction
of
life
from the planet
earth
. The other hot topic is the
deforestation
, again it helps
the
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global warming as well.
This
is a direct impact of human activity which is cutting
trees
for various human requirements
such
as agriculture, housing, and industries. Animals including humans
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not possible on
earth
without
trees
.
Trees
provide
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clean air with Oxygen for the
breething
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breathing
pourpose
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purpose
of all animals.
Therefore
no
trees
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no
breething
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breathing
which means no
life
. And as I mentioned above,
trees
will help
reducing
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the
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global warming by absorbing the
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gases. So saving
trees
will indirectly help
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the
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global warming as well. By looking at all the facts, my opinion is both problems are
equaly
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equally
important and no point of arguing that one is more important than the other. Everything is interconnected and one
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misbehaviour
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a new problem.
Therefore
we have to take all the precautions to protect the mother nature.
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  • Greenhouse effect
  • Industrial emissions
  • Sea levels
  • Extreme weather events
  • Biodiversity
  • Carbon emissions
  • Renewable energy
  • Paris Climate Accord
  • Carbon cycle
  • Soil erosion
  • Water cycles
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Reforestation
  • Sustainable forest management
  • Indigenous communities
  • Localized impacts
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