Some people are of the opinion that there should be a car-free day once every month, on which no private vehicles are allowed on the road. Discuss the advantages and possible disadvantages.
It is often argued by
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ew people that once every month there should be a Add an article
a
car-free
day
on which no private vehicles
are allowed on the road. This
essay discusses the advantages and disadvantages of this
issue.
To begin
with the disadvantages, people who have some urgencies on the car-free
day
will be stuck owing to proper transporation
facilities. Correct your spelling
transportation
For example
, if an employee who has some urgent work and needs to report in his office suddenly remembers on the morning that it is a car-free
day
now, eventhough
he owns a car it cannot be used even in urgencies. Correct your spelling
even though
As a result
, he might be even risking his job because of this
stringent law. In addition
to this
, as no car owner is allowed to ride the car on a car-free
day
, the crowdedness in public transport is likely to be very high. For example
, when a private vehicle is in repair m
ajority of the people often tend to travel by government transport like catching a bus or metro train. Add an article
the
This
high density of population is dangerous that could result in s
pread of contagious diseases.
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On the other hand
, there are some advantages to this
as well. Firstly
, there could be t
remendous decrease in air pollution that will be emitted by the Add an article
a
vehicles
because of the car-free
day
. For instance
, as there will be many vehicles
driven daily the gases released from them will do no better than harm lives. But, introducing a car-free
day
once a month will greatly influence the level of harm being done. Furthermore
, by introducing car-free
day
managing traffic on that day
will definitely ease out as there will be less
Change the quantifier
fewer
vehicles
on road for that day
. For instance
, in an area where there are more vehicles
, traffic management is very difficult. But, because of the car-free
day
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,
this
problem can be addressed to an extent.
To conclude, by introducing a day
as car-free
day
once a month can not only have some disadvantages like no proper transport but also
has advantages of advoiding
pollution and traffic.Correct your spelling
avoiding
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