Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Recently, there has been widespread controversy about the issue of sharing of vitals
information
to the public. These are two contrasting viewpoints, some scholars claim that it is beneficial to publicize cogent information
about some field
such
as science
, economy and academic level while others opin that some facts should be limited for publicizing. This
essay will discuss both viewpoints and a final opinion will be drawn.
To start with, supporters of this
points claim that disseminating facts about science
, business talk or academic field
is paramount because it enhance
people preparedness. Change the verb form
enhances
This
implies that,
precautions are taken easily if there is exposure to negative effect and it Remove the comma
apply
prevent
severe victims. Change the verb form
prevents
Likewise
, in the area of business, investors make a decision to invest more or reduce their contribution if proper information
is given to them. In addition
to this
point, proper sharing of information
help to enhance the scope of knowledge within the field
of science
and research
work. This
means that researchers will be able to know their limit and search more for improvement. To cite an example, in the area of cancer control, Scientist in Nigeria are engaging more in r
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Hence
, I believe that proper information
exchange is vital to the progress of the world at large.
In contrast
, o
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the
this
view allude
that facts or data should be concealed especially in some specific area Change the verb form
alludes
suchs
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such
research
and science
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also
a
cademic level because it can create fear and competition within the society. Add an article
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In other words
, military information
and technology can pose threat within the public and they must be classified. In addition
, they can be i
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rate
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rates
such
as hacking online servers and personal accounts. For instance
, the Economic and Financial Crime Commission in Nigeria revealed the hike in yber
crime rate in the country. Correct your spelling
cyber
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Therefore
, this
can be demonstrated that publicizing vital information
about some field
can be dangerous.
In conclusion, this
essay discussed about
important of broadcasting of some scientific or Remove the preposition
apply
research
information
within the society, some claimed that is
it beneficial while others disapproved the motive. To my perspective, I opined that disseminating of information
enhanced knowledge and contribute to the rate of preparedness.Submitted by Ayoqueen on
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