Some people believe that governments should spend money on the arts. Others assert that this money should be used to improve public services and infrastructure. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Although

it is sometimes thought that

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overnment should invest in the arts, other people believe that the focus should be on improving public

services

. In my opinion,

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overnment should spend

money

on

both

sectors, arts and infrastructure. On the one hand,

art

represents the culture of the country, and it can encourage tourists to visit

this

place. Not only historical buildings and monuments, but

also

music and dance that can be performed in

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, can attract people from outside the country.

This

stimulates the tourism sector and eventually can lead to

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ountry’s economic growth.

Furthermore

, our history of

art

must be preserved for future generations,

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we will lose our roots and own unique culture.

On the other hand

, there are several reasons to spend

government

budget on public

services

. Public

services

have a huge impact on the quality of life and our society depends on

services

,

such

as medicine, education, roads etc.

For example

, if our

government

does not spend enough

money

on hospitals and improving healthcare,

then

the health of our society will decrease, the same goes

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other

services

.

Moreover

, poor public

services

can not only reduce the quality of life of a society

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but

also

can decline economic growth.

Finally

, in my view,

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overnment should invest

money

on

both

, arts and public

services

. While

art

reflects the culture and attracts many international tourists,

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nfrastructure helps to improve the quality of life,

both

are important for the development of the country’s economy. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe it would be better for the country to spend

money

equally

on

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all sectors. Improving

both

,

art

and public

services

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essential for the country’s future.