Some people believe that it is possible for a country to be economically successful and have a clean environment. Others argue that these two aims are not compatible. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the era of modernization and technical progress, some people believe that society is able to maintain a tidy

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and provide successful economic development at the same time.

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others argue that in the modern

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these two goals play an inverted role. From my perspective, it is not obvious that nature suffers the development outcomes. On the one hand, the industry is a vital driving force for the country’s economy. In fact, the consequences of the factories which provide a profit often contaminate the environment.

As a result

, the chemicals, namely exhaust fumes and carbon are released into the atmosphere polluting the air and water resources. A good illustration

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is China where the permanent manufacturing line determines the highest air contaminating index in the world. Eventually, maintaining

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clear ecology and harmful

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seem to be delusory simultaneously.

On the other hand

, despite the destructive effect on the industry, it is still possible to preserve a significantly high level of nature without damaging the nation’s economic rate. Contemporary technologies may provide factories with eco-friendly materials and recycling

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.

Likewise

, reusing water, plastic

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paper can minimize

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harmful

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effects

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on the environment.

For example

, Germany has started to use

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innovative

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reusing and recycling

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investing money in

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founding special companies.

Hence

, if each country provides

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policy, the range of pollution will be reduced all over the world.

In addition

, adapting the manufacturing process to nature’s needs will give employment to the people who in the long-term perspective will provide

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prosperity. In conclusion, focusing on society’s wealth cannot exist

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the protection of the environment since releasing toxic materials into the atmosphere.

Nevertheless

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contemporary involvements will ensure the chance to minimize the range of pollution.