International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited. DO you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Saini, Hello!! My name is Gursharn. I live in flat no 420, exactly opposite to your flat 421.
First
, I would like to welcome you as my neighbour. I'm confident that we will share a happy and cooperative neighbourhood. I am writing
this
letter to draw your attention to your
car
parking spot. I think you might not have gone through the guidebook which is given to every new member of the community. Well, I would like to inform you that you park your
car
at my place. Because of
this
, I have had to park my
car
on street from
last
three days. I would be really grateful If you could park your
car
at the right number. I know you have two cars you can
also
get permission for extra parking spot from society office. I hope you understand my problem and follow society guideline. I look forward to having your co-operation. Thank You,
Gursharn
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Gulshan
Gurcharan
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchange
  • Exposure
  • Broadens horizons
  • Increases understanding
  • Promotes economic growth
  • Tourism
  • Educational opportunities
  • Personal development
  • Self-confidence
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon footprint
  • Disease transmission
  • Economic disparities
  • Cultural misunderstandings
  • Clashes
  • Security risks
  • Safety concerns
  • Balancing
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
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