Some feels that the effect of advertising are potivie for individuals and business, while other think they are negative.

Advertisement
is that pedestal which can take the businesses to new heights. Undoubtedly, it has many benefits,
however
Add a comma
,
show examples
on the other side
Add a comma
,
show examples
it has potential drawbacks too. My
view point
Correct your spelling
viewpoint
show examples
maintains the balance between both for fruitful results. Some part of the world
contemplate
Change the verb form
contemplates
show examples
that marketing through
advertisement
support businesses by enhancing their sales.
Additionally
,
a
Add an article
the
show examples
dvertisement
also
helps new products to enter
into
Verify preposition usage
apply
show examples
the market and attain popularity. Nowadays, the
advertisement
through hashtags on social networking sites
are
Change the verb form
is
show examples
also
pervasive.
For example
, a global
food
company named ”Nestle” has a hashtag “Good
Food
Good Life” to make people feel that Nestle makes good
food
and if anyone wants to enjoy a good life
then
he should choose good
food
. There are others who hold a baton of
d
Add an article
the
a
show examples
ifferent belief that
advertisement
misleads the consumer.
For example
, some
food
companies claim their product as “100%
fat free
Add a hyphen
fat-free
show examples
” to attract
diet conscious
Add a hyphen
diet-conscious
show examples
consumers even though it contains an ample amount of fat.
Thus
, people feel cheated.
Therefore
, it results in hampering the brand image. According to my perception
advertisement
is a great way of communication between company and consumer.
Thus
it must be used in an ethical and responsible manner. Of Course, it boosts the product to penetrate into the market.
However
, if not used in a proper manner it can
paves
Change the verb form
pave
show examples
the way to severe implications to brand image
Submitted by ramanvansh8 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: