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The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write 180-220 words.

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Some
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 argue that independent travelling is the best
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 to explore new places while others believe that a group of tourists should be accompanied by a tour
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. In my opinion, travelling by yourself is the most profitable variant to travel. There are several reasons why I think so.
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 of all, when travelling independently,
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 can not only visit boring museums and historical sites
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 but
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 see places where local
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 usually spend their leisure time.
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, I think that travelling independently,
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 experience new unforgettable emotions unlike while a tourist
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.
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, some
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 consider group travelling led by a
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 the best
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 to explore new destinations. They argue that
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this
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people
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 can learn basic historical data and facts in order to broaden their horizons. What is more, with a help of a tour
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 tourists will never get lost in
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nfamiliar country. Personally, I believe that
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 excursions are not interesting, so it is better to gain new knowledge about culture, traditions and customs of the country from local
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, I am convinced that if you have a GPS, you will never get lost. In conclusion, I am convinced that independent travelling organized by yourself without
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upport of a
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 is the best
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 to explore new sites.
People
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 really benefit from it, as it brings unforgettable experiences.

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • organization
  • knowledgeable
  • itinerary
  • local customs
  • language barrier
  • freedom
  • flexibility
  • random
  • spontaneous
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