In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

it is a tradition in some regions that putting a lot of effort to

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in goal.

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nowadays, some people force their younger generation to achieve something in their life.

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that it has both positive and negative consequences as it is stated in the following paragraphs.

Firstly

,

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is one of the important

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that our children must have to reach

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mbitions in a polite way. Sequently it teaches us to focus on our goals in a correct way than doing fraud

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or

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hild being told

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fact can be trained their mind in a positive aspect from the beginning and that will build our future generation in a positive way. In fact, I can clearly see our children around my environment with these best vibes, particularly, in their studies. Parents continuously encourage them to study and

as a result

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ncreased number of graduates in our area in different fields.

Consequently

, hard efforts lead to success and develop a healthy generation.

On the contrary

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have drawbacks too because it doesn’t fit for all tasks. In

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ide range of

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that not only depend on lots of efforts whereas,

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but some of them might also

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need intelligence, critical thinking and other aspects so that people should stop talking on

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only.

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hild may get bored or frustrated on keep doing that.

For instance

, in our community, some children behave arrogantly when they are imposed on hard

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and get to know there

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no future if they do not put hard efforts.

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folks should be stopped to protect their future mental health. All in all, to sum up, even if there is a myth on

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hard works

to

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, there are merits and demerits too. In one hand, when it improves a polite nation, it

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affects our children’s mental health.

Therefore

, parents should understand their children’s abilities and according to they should be encouraged on goals