In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Nowadays, people put their hard

efforts

to succeed in their ambition

likewise

, in different regions, youngsters in a particular society have to pursue their goal hardly with whole

efforts

as it is stated in the tradition.

However

,

this

tradition has benefits and drawbacks for some reasons.

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benefit of

this

diligent work is that it motivates the little ones to reach their goal. As our younger generation has had dreams since the beginning of their lives and if anyone encourages them to pursue their goal that helps a lot to get inspired every time and become a better version of them by hard

efforts

and staying positive.

For example

, in Sri Lanka, parents motivate their children especially in scholarship exams, ordinary level and advanced level examinations to get best results and pursue their passion in future by pushing them to study hard.

Therefore

, there is a successful story behind every hard work.

On the other hand

, in some cases, forcing on hard work may have drawbacks that could burn out the children physically and mentally. When they have believed to achieve unrealistic goals and pursue

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that, it could be overburdened for them and they may have not succeeded in their ambition.

As a result

of

this

, certainly, they will be exhausted and frustrated.

For instance

, again I mention my country where parents give

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oughest fight with their children to get best marks in scholarship exam

however

in some case

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when the child does not get that expected results, they are burst out mentally and eventually attempt to suicide. These negative consequences lead to affect our younger generation. In conclusion, if hard

efforts

help to succeed on children’s passion, sometimes, it buries them in some drawbacks

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knowing their level is much crucial before setting the goals to expend their energy on

hardwork

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hard work

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